Fujitsu BIWD-0991-01ENK(00) Manual Do Utilizador

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Chapter 5   Hints on Pre-/Post-editing for JE Translation

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● Avoiding verbose expressions

Verbose expressions may be translated into awkward English sentences, causing 
misinterpretations.

● Avoiding using duplicate words

A sentence containing redundant words or synonyms is translated into awkward English, in 
which redundant words are used repeatedly.

⇒ Deleting unnecessary words

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ソ フ ト ウェ アを 起動の状態にせよ 。

Put software into the state of the start.

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ソ フ ト ウェ アを 起動せよ 。

Start software.

⇒ Rewriting a sentence into a simpler one

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本書は文法について記述さ れたも のです。

This book is the one described about the grammar.

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本書は文法について記述さ れていま す。

This book is described about the grammar.

⇒ Deleting unnecessary redundant words

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事務機器には、 コ ピ ー、 ワード プ ロ セッ サ、 フ ァ イ ルキャ ビ ネッ ト など の機器が
含ま れる 。

Equipment such as the copy, word processors, and the file cabinets are included in 
the office equipment.

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事務機器には、 コ ピ ー、 ワード プ ロ セッ サ、 フ ァ イ ルキャ ビ ネッ ト など が含ま れ
る 。

The copy, the word processor, and the file cabinet, etc. are included in the office 
equipment.

⇒ Deleting unnecessary synonyms

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ロ ボッ ト はおのおの別々に動作し ている 。

The robot works separately respectively.

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ロ ボッ ト は別々に動作し ている 。

The robot works separately.